Practice Script #2

  • Dan Warner

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    November 12, 2022 at 6:56 pm
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    • Gloria Comes

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      November 13, 2022 at 8:18 pm
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      Script #2

      Thank you for the practice!

      • Dan Warner

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        November 13, 2022 at 9:11 pm
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        Hey Gloria! Glad you’re liking the challenge. I don’t think your video uploaded with your post, maybe try it again.

    • Deleted User

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      November 15, 2022 at 4:56 pm
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      Here!

    • Deleted User

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      November 30, 2022 at 2:55 pm
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      Dan and Alex, Thank you so much for your feedback on practice script #1 😊🙏

      I have taken note of your advise and hope that you see that in this video!

      I really enjoyed this one too, thank you 🙏

      • Dan Warner

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        November 30, 2022 at 8:29 pm
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        Really great Kaylee! I liked your emotion and the pace. Your empathy was quite good as well. The only thing I’d change, and I know it’s a small thing, but I’d move your hair out of the way. It’s a bit distracting and it might throw the casting directors off a bit. Other than that, well done!

        -Dan

        • Deleted User

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          December 1, 2022 at 12:40 am
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          Thank you so much for the feedback. I appreciate this opportunity immensely!

    • Cindy Roberts

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      December 19, 2022 at 3:40 pm
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    • Cindy Roberts

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      • Dan Warner

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        December 20, 2022 at 9:29 am
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        Can you re-load this? It’s not coming through on my end.

        Thanks

        Dan

  • Deleted User

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    November 13, 2022 at 9:22 am
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    Dave Lewin Practice Script #2

    • Dan Warner

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      November 16, 2022 at 3:02 pm
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      Pretty good Dave. I’d like to see a little stronger moment before, and move your eye line just a bit closer to camera. You had a nice use of your space. Maybe take a bit more time (not much) but a bit more at the top before you start your dialogue, but all in all it was pretty good.

      Dan

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    • Dan Warner

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      November 25, 2022 at 3:44 pm
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      Really nice Stepan. I liked how simple you were. I would take a bit more time before you tell her you saw jamie at the movies with someone else. Just a little more hesitation there would be good, but I liked your performance.

      Well done!
      -Dan

  • Cindy Roberts

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    December 19, 2022 at 4:02 pm
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    December 19, 2022 at 4:22 pm
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    • Dan Warner

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      December 20, 2022 at 9:27 am
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      Very nice Cindy.

      Moving forward I would use a bit more energy and be a little more “matter of fact” I did like your empathy, but just pull it back a bit. Less is always more on these things. Always think how you would deliver this news to a friend. When you’re not sure about something, always fall back on being a real person in a real place having a real experience.

      You’re doing great! Keep up the good work.

      Happy Holidays!!

      -Dan

      • Cindy Roberts

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        December 20, 2022 at 2:27 pm
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        Thank you for the constructive advice Dan.

        Happy Holidays to you too!

  • Cindy Roberts

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    December 20, 2022 at 2:31 pm
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    Hi Dan, I have already reloaded it.

    Cindy