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Practice Script #2
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Practice Script #2
Posted by Dan Warner on October 23, 2022 at 8:16 pmStep 3 (Use a Good Reader) and Step 4 (Practice Script #2)
Were you able to connect with your character? Did you struggle with this one? Let me know how it went for you. Post your Self-Tape video here for practice script #2
HOW TO POST YOUR SELF-TAPE:
1. Click REPLY button on the right hand side2. Upload your video
3. Click POST
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HOW TO POST YOUR SELF-TAPE:
1. Click the gold REPLY button on the right hand side above the Subscribe button2. Upload your video
3. Click POST
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Hey Gloria! Glad you’re liking the challenge. I don’t think your video uploaded with your post, maybe try it again.
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MemberNovember 15, 2022 at 4:56 pm0Here!
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MemberNovember 30, 2022 at 2:55 pm0Dan and Alex, Thank you so much for your feedback on practice script #1 😊🙏
I have taken note of your advise and hope that you see that in this video!
I really enjoyed this one too, thank you 🙏
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Really great Kaylee! I liked your emotion and the pace. Your empathy was quite good as well. The only thing I’d change, and I know it’s a small thing, but I’d move your hair out of the way. It’s a bit distracting and it might throw the casting directors off a bit. Other than that, well done!
-Dan
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MemberDecember 1, 2022 at 12:40 am0Thank you so much for the feedback. I appreciate this opportunity immensely!
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Can you re-load this? It’s not coming through on my end.
Thanks
Dan
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MemberNovember 13, 2022 at 9:22 am0Dave Lewin Practice Script #2
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Pretty good Dave. I’d like to see a little stronger moment before, and move your eye line just a bit closer to camera. You had a nice use of your space. Maybe take a bit more time (not much) but a bit more at the top before you start your dialogue, but all in all it was pretty good.
Dan
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Really nice Stepan. I liked how simple you were. I would take a bit more time before you tell her you saw jamie at the movies with someone else. Just a little more hesitation there would be good, but I liked your performance.
Well done!
-Dan
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Very nice Cindy.
Moving forward I would use a bit more energy and be a little more “matter of fact” I did like your empathy, but just pull it back a bit. Less is always more on these things. Always think how you would deliver this news to a friend. When you’re not sure about something, always fall back on being a real person in a real place having a real experience.
You’re doing great! Keep up the good work.
Happy Holidays!!
-Dan
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Thank you for the constructive advice Dan.
Happy Holidays to you too!
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Let’s hope this time my video uploads. Fingers crossed!
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Tank! I like your subtle glances and the inflection in your voice. It really adds to the feeling of the scene.
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