Practice Script #2

  • Dan Warner

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    November 12, 2022 at 6:56 pm
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    HOW TO POST YOUR SELF-TAPE:
    1. Click the gold REPLY button on the right hand side above the Subscribe button

    2. Upload your video

    3. Click POST

    Watch this video to see the step by step

    https://www.actingcareerexpertstudio.com/groups/self-taping/forum/discussion/how-to-post-your-self-tapes/

    • Deleted User

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      November 13, 2022 at 8:18 pm
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      Script #2

      Thank you for the practice!

      • Dan Warner

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        November 13, 2022 at 9:11 pm
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        Hey Gloria! Glad you’re liking the challenge. I don’t think your video uploaded with your post, maybe try it again.

    • Deleted User

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      November 30, 2022 at 2:55 pm
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      Dan and Alex, Thank you so much for your feedback on practice script #1 😊🙏

      I have taken note of your advise and hope that you see that in this video!

      I really enjoyed this one too, thank you 🙏

      • Dan Warner

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        November 30, 2022 at 8:29 pm
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        Really great Kaylee! I liked your emotion and the pace. Your empathy was quite good as well. The only thing I’d change, and I know it’s a small thing, but I’d move your hair out of the way. It’s a bit distracting and it might throw the casting directors off a bit. Other than that, well done!

        -Dan

        • Deleted User

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          December 1, 2022 at 12:40 am
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          Thank you so much for the feedback. I appreciate this opportunity immensely!

    • Cindy Roberts

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      December 19, 2022 at 3:40 pm
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      • Dan Warner

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        December 20, 2022 at 9:29 am
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        Can you re-load this? It’s not coming through on my end.

        Thanks

        Dan

    • Deleted User

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      September 14, 2025 at 8:21 pm
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      Self tape practice script #2 🙏

      • Deleted User

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        September 14, 2025 at 9:25 pm
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        l, like Cindy seem to be having problems uploading??

      • Deleted User

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        September 14, 2025 at 9:50 pm
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        Will try again to upload

        self test practice #2

  • Deleted User

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    November 13, 2022 at 9:22 am
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    Dave Lewin Practice Script #2

    • Dan Warner

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      November 16, 2022 at 3:02 pm
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      Pretty good Dave. I’d like to see a little stronger moment before, and move your eye line just a bit closer to camera. You had a nice use of your space. Maybe take a bit more time (not much) but a bit more at the top before you start your dialogue, but all in all it was pretty good.

      Dan

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    • Dan Warner

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      November 25, 2022 at 3:44 pm
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      Really nice Stepan. I liked how simple you were. I would take a bit more time before you tell her you saw jamie at the movies with someone else. Just a little more hesitation there would be good, but I liked your performance.

      Well done!
      -Dan

  • Cindy Roberts

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    December 19, 2022 at 4:02 pm
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    • Dan Warner

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      December 20, 2022 at 9:27 am
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      Very nice Cindy.

      Moving forward I would use a bit more energy and be a little more “matter of fact” I did like your empathy, but just pull it back a bit. Less is always more on these things. Always think how you would deliver this news to a friend. When you’re not sure about something, always fall back on being a real person in a real place having a real experience.

      You’re doing great! Keep up the good work.

      Happy Holidays!!

      -Dan

      • Cindy Roberts

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        December 20, 2022 at 2:27 pm
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        Thank you for the constructive advice Dan.

        Happy Holidays to you too!

    • Madison Wilkes

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      April 30, 2025 at 7:12 pm
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      I really liked this Cindy! Great job. 👏

      • Cindy Roberts

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        May 1, 2025 at 4:59 pm
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        Thank you Madison!

  • Cindy Roberts

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    December 20, 2022 at 2:31 pm
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    Hi Dan, I have already reloaded it.

    Cindy

  • Elizabeth Breckenkamp

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    May 17, 2024 at 5:04 pm
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    Let’s hope this time my video uploads. Fingers crossed!

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    Practice script #2 - Breckenkamp

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    • Madison Wilkes

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      April 30, 2025 at 7:12 pm
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      Very Cool Elizabeth! Well done. 👍

  • Tank Kelly

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    Selftape

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    • Rina R

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      November 7, 2024 at 1:45 pm
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      Tank! I like your subtle glances and the inflection in your voice. It really adds to the feeling of the scene.

    • Madison Wilkes

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      April 30, 2025 at 7:11 pm
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      Great job Tank!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

  • Tank Kelly

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    November 7, 2024 at 1:56 pm
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    I greatly appreciate the feedback.

  • Leslie Barnett

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    January 4, 2025 at 11:13 am
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    Hi, here’s my two takes stitched together or the Self tape exercise.

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    Self tape exercise

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    • Dan Warner

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      January 4, 2025 at 6:45 pm
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      Really great job here Leslie! I love how you took your time with it. I liked your volume and how unsure you were about the situation. It seemed very real and grounded.
      Things I would change moving forward, is I’d raise my camera up a bit so it’s more eye lever. I’d exit frame on one of the takes, and maybe look around a bit to be more grounded in your environment. We can also go over this in the next Zoom meeting.
      Nice job! 👏

    • Jack Handy

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      January 5, 2025 at 8:56 am
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      Nice job Leslie! Very authentic and grounded. 👍🏽

      • Leslie Barnett

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        January 5, 2025 at 1:31 pm
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        Thank you so much for the feedback Jack!🤩

  • Leslie Barnett

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    January 5, 2025 at 1:30 pm
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    Thank you for the feedback! I will do that! I look forward to the Zoom meeting!🤩

  • Leslie Barnett

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    January 6, 2025 at 1:58 pm
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    Script #2

    I used my little sister as a reader but I think she was a little distracted smh, next time I’ll use a different reader lol

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    self tape exercise #

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    • Dan Warner

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      January 8, 2025 at 9:52 am
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      Good read Leslie. Yeah, I would not have the reader moving so much, which made shadows in your background. Your read and your performance was very good and simple. Well done! 👏🏽

  • Alexander-Christopher Jones

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    February 27, 2025 at 10:52 am
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    • Dan Warner

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      March 2, 2025 at 12:04 pm
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      Great Alex. Very simple and grounded. Nice work on this one. On a second take maybe take your eye line other places and make it more difficult to look your friend in the eye. Be a bit more uncomfortable.

      Well done.

    • Madison Wilkes

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      April 30, 2025 at 7:10 pm
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      Good work here Alex! 👍🏼

  • Denise Syer

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    April 22, 2025 at 6:58 am
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    Working on my self-tapes! Here is my practice for script #2.

    Appreciate any feedback, thanks!

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    Practice Script #2 - Denise

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    • This reply was modified 10 months, 2 weeks ago by  Denise Syer.
    • This reply was modified 10 months, 2 weeks ago by  Denise Syer.
    • Dan Warner

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      April 23, 2025 at 9:56 am
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      Denise, you did a really nice job on this self-tape. It was grounded, honest, and simple.

      What stood out to me was your ability to stay present and real throughout the entire piece. You didn’t push, you didn’t overplay it—and because of that, the heartbreak landed. I could feel it. It was subtle, and right at the forefront. That moment where you revealed what you had seen to your friend felt like a real conversation, not a performance.

      So many actors feel the need to do more, to make it bigger, more dramatic, more emotional. But you trusted the simplicity of the scene.

      Thank you for not making this more than it needed to be. That choice made it more authentic, more relatable, and ultimately, more moving. Really great work, Denise. Keep going.

      • Denise Syer

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        April 24, 2025 at 5:50 am
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        Thank you Dan for the feedback!

    • Madison Wilkes

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      April 30, 2025 at 7:10 pm
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      Nice job here Denise! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

  • Steven Connor

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    May 8, 2025 at 5:26 pm
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    Here’s Self-Tape Practice Script #2

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