Practice Script #1

  • Salvador Olague

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    November 5, 2022 at 8:25 pm
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    Here is the video dan. #2 challenge

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  • Marko Toomla

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    November 6, 2022 at 12:29 pm
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    Self Tape Challenge #1

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  • Dave Lewin

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    November 8, 2022 at 11:25 am
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    Practice Script #1

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    • Dan Warner

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      November 8, 2022 at 1:27 pm
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      Well done Dave! I like how you took your time. Your tone and volume level was spot on. There was just enough suspicion and urgency in your voice as well. Congratulations!

    • Rina Rasia

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      November 9, 2022 at 7:34 am
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      I like your emphasis on “too quiet” and your eyeline for the second person

  • Stepan Sereda

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    November 9, 2022 at 11:45 am
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    I hope I post the reply properly. Sorry if not. It says I’m replying to Salvador… can’t find how to reply to the starting message. 🤦‍♂️

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    • Dan Warner

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      November 16, 2022 at 3:06 pm
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      Good Stepan,

      I’d like to see more urgency in your tone, and to be a bit more nervous. Maybe a stronger moment before. But a nice start to these practice scripts.

      Dan

    • Alex Wolf

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      November 25, 2022 at 3:54 pm
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      Nice work here Stepan.

  • Bea Cuenco

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    November 20, 2022 at 11:32 pm
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    Hi!

    Here is a compilation of both of my takes. This was a really fun start to the Self Tape Challenge! I loved making up different characters and exploring what kind of choices they would’ve made in this scenario. Looking forward to your feedback and to the rest of the challenge.

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    • Dan Warner

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      November 21, 2022 at 3:52 pm
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      Yay Bea!!!

      What a great start. I liked what you did and the choices you made, and your lighting and sound are good for a Self-Tape. I liked take #2 the best. I’m looking forward to your next one!

      -Dan

    • Alex Wolf

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      November 25, 2022 at 3:53 pm
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      This was great Bea! Looking forward to your next one.

  • Kaylee Wilkinson

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    November 23, 2022 at 1:54 pm
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    This was such an exciting start to the self-tape challenge 🙏✨

    I am definitely going to invest in a tripod / ring light so that I can adjust my camera angles better and I won’t be limited to recording in my bathroom 🙈

    Looking forward to your feedback 🙏

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    • Dan Warner

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      November 25, 2022 at 3:40 pm
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      Great job Kaylee! I liked your different choices. I also liked your volume fluctuation in your voice. I would try to do a little less and try to be a little more still next time. I hope that makes sense. But a great start!

      A tripod is definitely a great thing to have. I would also look for a different light other than a ring light. I have a light suggestion on my equipment page here on the site.

      Well done. Keep up the good work.

      -Dan

    • Alex Wolf

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      November 25, 2022 at 3:53 pm
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      Great job Kaylee!

  • Angelina Hunt

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    November 28, 2022 at 6:21 pm
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    Practice script #1

    I would love to hear some feedback on how I can improve! I was a bit nervous.

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    • Dan Warner

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      November 28, 2022 at 6:39 pm
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      Nice job Angelina. I liked the first take the best. I liked your nervousness you had going on. I know you said you were nervous, and if you didn’t use that in your scene, do that next time, because it was really nice. Moving forward I’d like to see a little more urgency, and maybe look around a bit more and take your time. Your lighting and sound are both good. I know it’s just a practice script, but I would wear a different shirt as well. All in all it’s a great start!

      Congratulations

      -Dan

    • Ann Fuller

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      November 28, 2022 at 6:51 pm
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      Great job Angelina~

  • Cindy Roberts

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    • Dan Warner

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      December 9, 2022 at 5:45 pm
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      Great start Cindy! I liked the tone of this. I would try a bit more urgency and be a bit more suspicious about the whole event. I would frame yourself tighter so there’s less space at the top of the frame. Also watch for glare in your glasses.

      Nice work! Looking forward to your next one.

      -Dan

      • Cindy Roberts

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        December 12, 2022 at 8:04 am
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        Thank you Dan!

    • Adam Collins

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      Nice one!

      • Cindy Roberts

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        May 26, 2023 at 6:37 pm
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        Thank you Adam!

    • Chase Anderson-Shaw

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      May 26, 2023 at 8:33 pm
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      Nice work here Cindy!

      • Cindy Roberts

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        Thank you Chase!

  • Monique Moore

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    May 17, 2023 at 1:11 pm
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    My top is the first one and the bottom is the second. A work in progress. 🫣🙃

    • Lucy Chang

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      May 19, 2023 at 9:06 am
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      Great job Monique!

    • Dan Warner

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      May 19, 2023 at 10:33 am
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      Really great start Monique! I really like how still you are with this. I would avoid shifting your eyes so much and focus on “who” your talking to. I like the first take the best.

      Well done!

      Keep up the good work

      -Dan

      • Monique Moore

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        May 19, 2023 at 10:26 pm
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        Thank you, will do!

    • Beth Arthur

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      May 19, 2023 at 10:36 am
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      Really great work here Monique. I like your subtle approach. Not over the top, but pretty grounded. Nice work.

    • Austen Jaye

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      May 19, 2023 at 10:37 am
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      Great job here Monique!

    • Cindy Roberts

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      May 19, 2023 at 1:02 pm
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      Great job Monique!

      • Monique Moore

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        May 19, 2023 at 10:05 pm
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        Thank you so much! 🙂

    • Adam Collins

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      May 26, 2023 at 6:10 pm
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      Pretty cool Monique!

    • IRIS SVIS

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      May 26, 2023 at 6:13 pm
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      Good job Monique.

    • Chase Anderson-Shaw

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      May 26, 2023 at 8:32 pm
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      Great one Monique, I like the 2nd one best!