[Dan Warner]

Really great job here Leslie! I love how you took your time with it. I liked your volume and how unsure you were about the situation. It seemed very real and grounded.
Things I would change moving forward, is I’d raise my camera up a bit so it’s more eye lever. I’d exit frame on one of the takes, and maybe look around a bit to be more grounded in your environment. We can also go over this in the next Zoom meeting.
Nice job! 👏