Reply To: Practice Script #2

  • Dan Warner

    Organizer
    November 16, 2022 at 3:02 pm
    26,170

    Pretty good Dave. I’d like to see a little stronger moment before, and move your eye line just a bit closer to camera. You had a nice use of your space. Maybe take a bit more time (not much) but a bit more at the top before you start your dialogue, but all in all it was pretty good.

    Dan