[Dan Warner]

Really great start Kevin!

I like how grounded you were and you didn’t seem to push it to much. That said, I’d just dial back the end a bit and throw away the last line. That kind of empathy goes a long way and set’s you apart from the rest of the actors playing it all the same way.
This is really good work Kevin. Keep pushing and I can’t wait to see what you do next! 👏🏽