[Dan Warner]

Melissa, this was a good start. You’re definitely bringing something honest to the work, and that’s always the most important thing.

Moving forward I’d love to see you slow down a bit and really take your time with this scene. Let the words land. Instead of just saying them, try to let us see you recalling the experience as you speak, just like the memory is unfolding in real time. That kind of internal work will make your performance feel more lived-in and layered.

Also, keep an eye on the facial expressions. You don’t need to do as much. Remember, the camera’s going to pick up every little flicker. Even if you’re just thinking or remembering something, it will register. So lean into stillness where you can and trust that the emotion is already there.

Again, this is a solid start, you’re on the right track. Keep digging in.