[Dan Warner]

AC, really nice work on this self-tape! Your first take was strong, grounded, subtle, and connected. I could feel the authenticity in your choices, and it definitely came across as a real person in a real place having a real experience. That’s exactly what you want.

One thing to think about for next time: use more of the frame. There’s room to explore the physical space a bit more and find moments to move with purpose and let that inform the scene. It doesn’t have to be big, just intentional.

As for the second take, it felt a bit too expressive. Try internalizing those emotions more. Let them sit under the surface and simmer. The camera is right there with you, and it picks up on even the slightest shift in thought. Sometimes, the most powerful choices are the ones you hold back.

All in all, very solid work. I’m looking forward to seeing you take it even deeper next time. Keep pushing, you’re on the right track!