[Dan Warner]

Tiffany, nice work on this self-tape!

Between the two takes, the second performance stood out. You brought much more subtlety and realism to the scene, and it made a huge difference. The choices felt grounded and authentic which is exactly what draws people in.

For the first take, it came off just a bit too over the top. Remember, the goal is always to be a real person in a real place having a real experience. Less is often more, especially on camera where every small detail reads.

One quick note on wardrobe: try to avoid shirts with big prints or text. I found myself, like any casting director would, spending the first 15 seconds reading your shirt and trying to figure out what it meant. It’s a quick fix that makes sure all the focus stays on you and your performance.

That second take, though, really solid work. Glad you’re a part of our group, and I’m looking forward to seeing you build on this!