[Dan Warner]

April,
Take 1 was so very good! It had all the elements in it. Just enough pity, empathy, and sadness for your friend without overdoing it. SO Very Good!
In take 2, I understand what you’re going for, but on a Self-Tape, it would have been a bit over the top. If it were a sketch comedy performance or something along that vein it could have worked and I applaud your boldness and really pushing the envelope on these exercises! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
Keep up the good work!