[Dan Warner]

Kayla, it’s really not as bad as you think. Your instinct to keep writing and shooting more content is exactly right, and that drive is going to serve you well.

Most of this can be shortened, which will help with pacing and clarity. The good news is your production value is strong — and that’s a huge part of the battle. Things look good on screen, your sound is good, and that’s important.

The last piece in the reel was a bit confusing to me, so just keep in mind how things land with a fresh audience. But that’s part of the process — figuring out what works and what doesn’t.

The bottom line: write, write, write. Keep going. You’re close, and you’re absolutely on the right track.